Private Beach

I’m trying something new.  It’s a form of Haiku called Tanka. It’s structure is similar but longer: 5-7-5-7-7

 

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soft waves break on our
private beach, sun warms our skin
lazily rocking
in our hammock we doze, just
needing a reason to move

— GB

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